What a creepy vibe but I like it that way. Ghost isn't something that should be always feared but it is good to.
Little quick but it is any interesting tale so far. I hope you will continue you this soon.
Depression is never easy to face alone. Most need someone out there to help them. ❤
I love this because of how cute it is. Though, I must admit you need to work out some little things in your story. In my opinion, it was a little too rush for me. The character development was done rather sloppy but it is alright. You are a fantastic writer that will get a hang of it. I really do hope to see you write again.
Thank you so much for sharing.
This was brilliant. I do love the words play and story it told.
The concept you have is a good one but there is too much grammar errors that is hard for me to fully enjoy. Do not fright. I suggest that you ask for an overlook before sumbiting your work to help you out. I do hope to read more of your work in the future. You got this!
Trusting is a natural thing. It is okay to try again buy do know that in time, there is going to be a time when you can't anymore. It's going to be okay because when you meet the right people that want your trust, they will work hard for it.