🌸Fate

I can relate to this greatly myself. I have a time in the year when I question myself and you put it into words. Though your writing does have a few punctual mistakes that needs to be fix. I hope to read more from you

-Fate🌸

You play with your words quite well. It makes this piece lively and capturing to read. Personally, you did a very great job with it. I do hope to see more of your work in the future.

This is excellent but you do have some spelling mistakes. Other than that, it's great stuff.

It was short but the message was beautifully told.

I love this. How I sometimes imagine if it was all in book. This is wonderful to read.

Beautiful. This is relatable to a lot of people. Surely it is worth being one.

I am rather interested to see where this will goes.

I liked this. Dark poems are my favorite but towards the end you could of add a little bit more so the last stanza would have a better impact on the readers.