United States • 28 y/o • FemaleReviews Given
It was short but the message was beautifully told.
This is excellent but you do have some spelling mistakes. Other than that, it's great stuff.
You play with your words quite well. It makes this piece lively and capturing to read. Personally, you did a very great job with it. I do hope to see more of your work in the future.
I can relate to this greatly myself. I have a time in the year when I question myself and you put it into words. Though your writing does have a few punctual mistakes that needs to be fix. I hope to read more from you
-Fate🌸
Trusting is a natural thing. It is okay to try again buy do know that in time, there is going to be a time when you can't anymore. It's going to be okay because when you meet the right people that want your trust, they will work hard for it.
-Fate🌸
The concept you have is a good one but there is too much grammar errors that is hard for me to fully enjoy. Do not fright. I suggest that you ask for an overlook before sumbiting your work to help you out. I do hope to read more of your work in the future. You got this!
-Fate🌸
This was brilliant. I do love the words play and story it told.
Thank you so much for sharing.