United States • 25 y/o • MaleReviews Received
Wow. Something about the way you write hits me so hard, and the emotion you've poured onto the page. . . I feel it.
"The irony with life is that those who wear masks often tell more truths that those with open faces."
-The Rose Society, by Marie Lu
"People like you and me,
aren't welcome anywhere is what I can feel and see,
when I look in the mirror in horror I flee
afraid of myself who I am meant to be
and I know you to don't feel free just like me, people like you and me
People like you and me
Stuck in a cage filled with sadness and rage
Just like a poetry book with hidden meanings
Aha look another secret in the page
Anger, sadness, happiness strange feelings
I should say
Not outside but inside we decay
It takes and steals and throws things away
Well what do you know it's here to stay
People like you and me
Its not that I feel sad but hollow inside
In the back of my mind cold and dark
To feel and laugh ofcourse I lied
My mind is broken chips and cracks just another matk
I feel sad and happy for someone to feel alone
Just like me in your mind you're not on the throne."
I do love your poetry it reminds me of me everyday I hope you make more
This makes me hurt so much inside. I love it, but wow. I hope people don't see me this way.
Love the ryhming
I can relate to this greatly myself. I have a time in the year when I question myself and you put it into words. Though your writing does have a few punctual mistakes that needs to be fix. I hope to read more from you
-Fate🌸
Trusting is a natural thing. It is okay to try again buy do know that in time, there is going to be a time when you can't anymore. It's going to be okay because when you meet the right people that want your trust, they will work hard for it.
-Fate🌸
I don't care about mistakes in hand writing i'm glad that you put this in my life I love it and can relate to it so much I am dealing with a lot right now so it helps me to know that you have the same thing happening to you it's good to know that there are other people that feel the same way I love this and will cherish it like my own child and even read it everyday thank you and I hope that you succeed in writing in the future I am just one more person added to your train of love and one day I hope that your train will stop for another and another and even more train carts to come and lach on we are now sisters by love we may not know each other but we will get through this together and one day your train will stop forever but it will still run in the dark and in our hearts and someone else will start it young as the new conductor and carry you to a better place but we will help them because you are wonderful and I hope to see more from you I love you and don't worry about errors!!!
I loved this, well done you are really good!!!
I really felt the emotion you wrote into this story and I so I felt the depth of it.
Keep up the good work!!