United States • 19 y/o • FemaleReviews Given
this was good, maybe in the next part you could add a twist of some sort.
the perfect amount of salt and sugar.
I can totally relate.
This story needs some work but it's pretty good for the most part.
For the "I maybe not be trendy but that's just me" part, I suggest(you don't have to) that you delete the 'be' at the end of 'maybe'".
Very descriptive of the room. Good job.
This is so good! I really shows the emotions that present themselves during a wildfire, or really any kind of destructive incident. Great writing!
This is sooo funny!