Ace

this was good, maybe in the next part you could add a twist of some sort.

the perfect amount of salt and sugar.

I can totally relate.

For the "I maybe not be trendy but that's just me" part, I suggest(you don't have to) that you delete the 'be' at the end of 'maybe'".

Very descriptive of the room. Good job.

This is so good! I really shows the emotions that present themselves during a wildfire, or really any kind of destructive incident. Great writing!

This is sooo funny!