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It is good, you just have a few spelling mistakes

its really good and kinda sad i liked it.

that was great. a little sad, but really great

I really liked this. It was really well writen and detailed. It was good, and sad. Good work

that got... INTENSE! WHOA! YOU KILLED THE MAIN CHARACTER! :O 10/10

That really did get intense! lol Great story!

great job! keep writing!

Woah... I'm kinda late, but I can still show my love, right? This was amazing! No one ever kills the main character... I'll have to try it sometime. Great writing!