hercules

A swell story. The way the prisoner moves things about with his power brings to mind the Force in Star Wars. Well done.

I really enjoyed this story. It brought to mind the Hound of the Baskervilles. Well done.

I really enjoyed this story too. Well done.

BEN BROWN

I enjoyed this just as much as the first part. Well done.

BEN BROWN

A good piece of writing. I like a good mystery. Well done.

BEN BROWN

Another excellent story. The way you described the colours at the beginning brought to mind the twelve astrological star signs. Towards the end it made me think of the light and shadow traits of ones character. Well done.

BEN BROWN

A great story. It reminds me of the Never Ending story when Bastian ends up reading the story in his school attic. I will read the rest of your stories. Well done.