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You introduce Subrata well. Yoi tell us whst we need to know without going into unnecessary detail. Yoi develop his relationship with the boy well too.

Honest and with a good punchline at the end. I like stories about wildlife. Thanks for sharing this.

You write vivid descriptions and a good twist. The character of the old man is described well, as is the setting.

You have some vivid metephores and the final sentence is certainly true.

Short though it is, a lot of people will relate to it.

I like the metephores of the heron and the airport terminal.

Good jokes and good imagery; keep it up.

You've done a good job of evoking the atmosphere in that kitchen. You used the crossings out well too.