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Brief though it is, you evoke the scene well.

Considering how young you are, you evoke nostalga very well.

You evokr the setting very well. I could imagine myself there.

This reminds me of what the vicar said at my father's funeral. He said this goodbye is different from all the others but don't forget see you as in see you later. Not everyone will agree but he meant well and i took it as it was meant.

I like this piece, your descriptions are vivid and the climax is a dtamatic twist. The relationship between the pets rings true.

IIts understandable if you're stressed. There's been s pandemic and a lot of mixed messages about it. You are not alone in feeling this way. Things can get better even when it serms hopeless. There was a recession in the 1980s and I lived through it. It didn't last forever. Don't give up hope.

You describe the scene well. Sitting by watet can indeed be very relaxing.

I'm not great when it comes to the technicalities of poetry but I relate to the sentiments expressed here. There's emotional truth in it.