jeancommunicates

Great Poem and so true. We are taxed to death and even after death like you said.

Hey, it flows and the guy is interesting. You have left us intrigued. Where is the rest of the story?

Quite a twist at the end. I liked it.

I enjoyed your rendering of Atlantis. Similar to Noah's Ark, no one listened to Noah, the prophet. God tells us in His Word, that He does nothing, unless He tells His prophets first.

Keep writing. I love reading it.

I love it.

Prophecy Child certainly has my attention. The mystery is definitely there. Love it so far.

Great job.