United States • 79 y/oReviews Given
Quite a twist at the end. I liked it.
Great job.
I love it.
Keep writing. I love reading it.
Many young people need to read this. There are some people you are better off never meeting. Guard your mind and be very careful of what can clutter it. Do not fear being alone. This writing proves there are worse things.
You've got to see yourself as God sees you. He says you are fearfully and wonderfully made. That is the only body you are going to get so be kind to it. And be kind to yourself. You deserve it. You write beautifully!
Great Poem and so true. We are taxed to death and even after death like you said.
Prophecy Child certainly has my attention. The mystery is definitely there. Love it so far.