United Kingdom • 27 y/o • FemaleReviews Received
Another slap-dash effort full of spelling mistakes.
Another disjointed, mishmash of a story. Your poor spelling and inappropriate use of certain words ruin much of your work and this is a prime example. This is just not a very good piece of writing.
Your change of name has, regrettably, not led to a change of standard. As (what has become) usual, your story has spelling and grammar inaccuracies as well as being too short to make any sort of sense or impact.
I just do not understand why you will not take - and act on - the advice you are given. You have some really good story ideas, but you are so slapdash when you write that you spoil them completely. You do not do yourself justice by submitting such sub-standard work when it is clear you are capable of much better IF you put in the effort...
I like that you choose variety of superficial topics. Kudos!
So Good! I've been reading all the other chapters and your stories/chapters are really good! Keep up!
wow iv'e been keeping up with this story and i really enjoy it keep up the great work. :-)