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Wow. That really got my mind thinking, and sometimes that can be dangerous 😆. Great job! A few grammar and punctuation errors but it sounds amazing!

Great job! But when do you tie it back together with the dream? How did the little boy become a dream-wandering person?

Great job! What happens with James?

Wow!! It sounds great! I knew it was a father or stepfather at about the third paragraph, but that's just because I have read things like this. There are a few grammar errors, but besides that it's great!

There were a few grammar errors but the way you wrote the piece of text made it emotional and created connections for the reader. Be strong!

Dude, that was great! There were a few punctuation errors, but I loved it! Hope to read more soon!

Oh my gosh thank you. You just made my day and I feel like I can finally breathe again. I come from a family where anxiety and self hate is placed casually and it took some really big self control to not harm myself. I am always jittery, and blame it on caffeine and other household items, but really it's just me wanting to get out. But where do we go when we are out? But thanks, you're awesome and considerate!

Holy crud. I love it!