Kat

Definetly!! I get where you are coming from, my friend!
I few grammar errors and the wrong "then" at one point, but besides that I am very impressed and LOVED IT!

I loved the feeling and emotional roller coaster you put the readers through. There were a few grammar errors:
"So so so" should be "so, so, so"
And so one. But I enjoyed your story and hope to hear more from you!

Yes yes yes!!! That was great! The detail, the senery!! I could FEEL it! Oh my gosh yes. Thank you. Please continue. I loved it. I just can't. Oh my gosh. Thank you.

Very feeling. I could definitely sense the pain of the narrator. It broke my heart to hear all that - I guess those who have experiance have a hard time forgetting.

Hang in there!!!

It was great!!! I loved it! I hope over to hear more from you!

Wow, I'm speachless. In a good way. I loved it!!

Thank you so much!! This really gave me hope and wonder!! Loved it!

So sincere and loving! Makes the reader wonder more about what happened! The lines didn't feel forced and the words flowed brilliantly! I loved it!!