Kat

Definetly!! I get where you are coming from, my friend!
I few grammar errors and the wrong "then" at one point, but besides that I am very impressed and LOVED IT!

It's great. The ending is fine the way it is, but there are some parts that seem a little choppy or out of place. Doing great!

Okey, here's my review:
Positive - really got the audience wondering what will happen next and the pot line is going slow enough to get the setting started and gave the reader a sense of what's happening.
Negative- it seems that in some places you forgot to read over the text and it was hard to follow what a few mistaken words meant. I advise reading over it out loud.
(I'm trying the whole criticism thing - am I good at it yet?)
Great so far!! Please do write more! -KP

I liked it, I kind of agree on the rant part, but I agree soooooo muuuccchhh about the self distructive motives of humans and how they act against themselves.
Thank you!

It sounds great, a few punctual and grammatical errors, but so far it sounds pretty good.
I understand what it is to first wade into the water. I slowly went in, but at chest deep I realized that the shore was becoming harder to see.
I find that it is easier to go in than out. You can come in, in less than three minutes. You come out from three months to three years - and to some even more.
It is hard to be in these hardships, you feel that you can't reach out for help because you are embarrassed about what you have done - or feel that they wouldn't understand.
Hang in here! -KP

I loved it!! I really want to hear more! How did the diseasestart? How could he remember loathing strawberries and not his children? What happened to his wife, parents, what did the worms look like?
I really like asking questions. You don't at all have to answer them at all. I'm just a question-er.

Great job! Touching and tear-bringing. I know it wasn't one of your strongest works, but it was one of the good ones that I have read on this website. (Sometimes people write about cat fur and it drives me nuts!!!)
You're doing great! -KP

Sounds great! A little short but I get where you're going.
-KP