Kat

Oh my gosh. I was almost crying. It was so sad! I hate how that ended (in an obsessed reader way)!

So sincere and loving! Makes the reader wonder more about what happened! The lines didn't feel forced and the words flowed brilliantly! I loved it!!

Thank you so much!! This really gave me hope and wonder!! Loved it!

Wow, I'm speachless. In a good way. I loved it!!

It was great!!! I loved it! I hope over to hear more from you!

Very feeling. I could definitely sense the pain of the narrator. It broke my heart to hear all that - I guess those who have experiance have a hard time forgetting.

Hang in there!!!

Yes yes yes!!! That was great! The detail, the senery!! I could FEEL it! Oh my gosh yes. Thank you. Please continue. I loved it. I just can't. Oh my gosh. Thank you.

I loved the feeling and emotional roller coaster you put the readers through. There were a few grammar errors:
"So so so" should be "so, so, so"
And so one. But I enjoyed your story and hope to hear more from you!