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I like it, but it could be a bit longer, but I still like it.
pretty good.
I liked it a lot, good job.
i liked it
Heavy, and so full of feeling, one thing I suggest is to work on your grammar. (but don't feel bad I struggle with it too) You could try copy and pasting it into either word or google docs, and then use that to help fix those mistakes, I mean that what I do. Also if you could see if you can download Grammarly, cause then it will point out the mistaked while you type it on this website.
Wow, just WOW.
well... that was a twist I didn't see coming. This reminds me of something that should be in the book, "Scary stories to tell in the dark." And I mean that in a good way. I liked it.
I am laughing so hard!