Reviews Given
Ah, yes, secrets. This describes them well. Great work.
One hundred percent felt that "you definitely know my sister" part. I like the mood of this story, the simplicity of it that explores the passing of strangers in a person's life.
I like the way this is written; how it's an analogy, but also just a fun little snippet of some gossips at a ball or whatever. It's fun to imagine what the people I know in life would wear, or what I would wear, in this world. Nice work.
Honestly I really like this poem, even if it is a bit melodramatic. I like how it's all kind of just stated as a fact, not as the speaker necessarily feeling sorry for themselves. It's an interesting idea.
I've been here. It sucks.
I don't think I would call it cheesy; the speaker has a sense of self-awareness that keeps it from being over the top, without taking away from the emotion of the story, which personally I felt very strongly. It has good flow. Great work!
One of my favorite short stories I've ever read. The emotions are spot on and the way it's written really pulled me in. Excellent work.
Haha, this is such a mood! There wasn't much depth to the story of the princess and the knight, but it was a fun drabble and I can always appreciate reversed gender roles. The break away to the author's perspective entertained me greatly. Nice work.
Ooh, I really like this one. I like the unique style of telling a story through letters, especially at the end where we can only assume we know why the brother quit writing. This is a story that I would want more of, except I don't know if it could work to expand on it; that would change the feel of it. Anyway, really good work.