Reviews Received
I'm not big on the technical aspects of poetry, but the feelings behind this are plausible and heartfelt. I'm sorry for your loss.
Frickin' LOTR is the BEST! Absolutely love Legolas because all us LOTR fans know that elves are the best race in the series and that archery is the best combat style in the series.
Love this.
Okay, my first name is Doctor, and my last name is Love. And you have a case of the fallsies it seems for someone who is different based on your diagnosis. Not uncommon, but for sure not common. Seems that the person for you is Spock. He shows no love, but knows the definition of love. Like how you wrote this poem about love, but not having it be a love poem.
Okay, first I wanna say, thank you for walking inside my mind for a full 204 words of this writing.
Next, I believe you mean "Figment" of my imagination, not "fragment".
Third, if a bear walks into the woods and eats berries, do the two words "bear" and "berries" become one word called "bearries"?
Lastly, let's keep our unique minds just between us if that's cool with you.
"Stick it to The Man!"- Dewey Finn (Jack Black); School of Rock
You do you, I'll do me and we'll both be happy individuals.