United States • 19 y/oReviews Received
This was a really good start!
Cool scary story mo oo haha it sad really amazing! I liked it but ir nerds more of scary words like a shout.
....... The swear adds nothing.
The humour of this is childish, but that makes it all the more enjoyable for some reason.
It's kinda confusing and random but mysterious. I liked it and I think you should try writing more poetry. :D
I go to the same school as Faith and she draws eyes soooo much! She is soooo good at drawing! One question: would it be okay if you made these stories a little longer please?