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Random. But good.

depressing...but it has a great moral to it

hey! i loved this little poem!
if you would like some constructive criticism i've got some:
it seems like you're trying a bit too hard to make things rhyme. not that there's anything wrong with that, but it seems a little awkward. not all poems need to rhyme at the end.
besides that, i think its amazing! great job!

I like how you connected this story to others...fascinating friendship!

Dark but beautifully written. Love twists people's minds and I feel like you showed that in this story. Great job!

Nice...but maybe you can describe how love can be good too? Besides that, I think it's a nice story. Can't wait to read the next one!

Hi! Nice poem! Musing means it's reflection or thought of something.

This poem really shows the two side of things. The good and bad part. Great and keep writing!