France • 62 y/oReviews Given
Well said
terrible!!!! and yes, I agree - you must tell....
Please do continue writing.... It can be very therapeutic
So very sad!
You really drew me into your 'hurt'
I wish you all the best for the future...
I quite liked this - up to the final paragraph about the new family, which I think spoiled the story. I think it would be much better with a different ending... or even (in my opinion) just to use the last sentence after Robin's death & end the story there
intriguing
I hope to read more
WOW - if this is true, I really feel for you. The writing is very powerful. The person you write about is not in the least 'selfish' at all but a very brave and beautiful person.
I wish you all the best
how tragic !
Very well done
A few grammatical errors, but the idea is brilliant