melissak

Aint and no don't go together

I think you mean "Come" not came.

Omg this was amazing! reminds me of the time i got lost at an airport. Needless to say my grandparents were both very mad but very happy lol.

Wow this is cool

it's really good!

This is a good story. You did good. There were a few places where it could use a comma or a semicolon, but its still a great story.