Oxygen

I would add more detail as The Valhallan recommended. Also why is he called the night watcher?

It's a good story. You may want to edit the "dooes" to make it seem less weird. Also are all the people in the story the same in real life, like at our school?

Remember, don't feel bad about yourself. You are not useless! Keep on writing!
P.S.: isn't' it a needle in a haystack?

I can relate so badly. Nice poem.

It's kinda confusing and random but mysterious. I liked it and I think you should try writing more poetry. :D

This story gave me hope. Keep up the good work!!!!!

I actually really like this poem. I think it is a way of telling someone that you still care about them but you don't really feel like listening to their problems. I think the only thing that ticked me off was that is was a little harsh, but if that was what you were aiming for then it's a good poem. Keep on writing. You are a great writer and have a lot of potential. TIP: write more poems to get better at writing poems, it actually really helps. :)