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It's kinda confusing and random but mysterious. I liked it and I think you should try writing more poetry. :D

I actually really like this poem. I think it is a way of telling someone that you still care about them but you don't really feel like listening to their problems. I think the only thing that ticked me off was that is was a little harsh, but if that was what you were aiming for then it's a good poem. Keep on writing. You are a great writer and have a lot of potential. TIP: write more poems to get better at writing poems, it actually really helps. :)

I can relate so badly. Nice poem.

I would add more detail as The Valhallan recommended. Also why is he called the night watcher?

Hehe I remember seeing you write this. Keep on writing more!

Remember, don't feel bad about yourself. You are not useless! Keep on writing!
P.S.: isn't' it a needle in a haystack?