It's a very meanngful poem which (poetically) makes us realise how bad times have become. Time flies...
Excellent! I want MORE!!!
Loved it! Amazing! I can't wait to read more of it.
Simply amazing! Brilliant. A poor child's innocence... Abusive Father... Helpless mother... Every single thing is so subtly conveyed with so little text. Children have the amazing ability to speak cute and short.
It was a really amazing story; I loved the theme. I heart how suspense takes over at the last. The end of this chapter leaves the readers wondering what'd be happening next.
Overall, nice effort. But, it had some inconsistencies.
A lovely piece of satire!