United States • 19 y/o • FemaleReviews Given
whoaaaaa... Elijah did not--
oh no... THE ALARM!!! XD
I like thisss. I'm not sure if this is the intended story you had, but I got Hunger Games vibes from it; like the speaker and "The One" are the last ones in the ring or something. I love the way you phrased the poem!
Niceeee!!! I love the creativity in this sooo much. The last two lines really felt like a punchline for a good joke.
aww, this is sooooo sweet! <3
Hands down, you're an awesome little sister to the person you're writing to.
Interestinggg... it may be too soon, but shiiiiiiiiiiip!?!?!
This is sooo relatable. I like the deep meaning behind it, and I feel like that's what really connected to me. Nice job!!! And I dunno what the "everyone else sees" in your poem, but I see a really talented writer and interesting person. I look forward to reading more from you! :D
Oh geez... you realize that this is basically where I left off yesterday, right?!?! WHY WOULD YOU DO THAT TO MEH?!?!?!?!?!