United States • 20 y/o • FemaleReviews Given
Beautiful! Your words flowed effortlessly, which reminded me of how songs are sung.
Our lives aren't truly ours. To take one's own life is to take it from the world and those who love us. I think your words showed this perfectly.
Sad... but so beautiful. Love conquers all. <3
Andy got rejected </3
Ca-rhys-ta???
Wow. In a way, it was beautiful-- there was so much meaning behind what you wrote. However, what happened was tragic. I think a couple words I'd use to describe your piece are inspiring, and solemn. You're a great writer, and I hope to read more of your creations! :)
I really liked this, and think your way of writing was very creative. The ending was funny... poor Jeff though-- he'll have to say the whole thing all over again. :)
Wow, I love this! I really like how you kind of left it open to the reader's interpretation too; like, it's generalized in the way that everyone might have their own person to relate this too.
Ooo... I loved this! I have no idea where she ends up... though I reaaaaaallllllly want to know!!! :D
Awww... so sweet! I loved that ending! The Saylarter ship has sailed!!! :D