United States • 19 y/o • FemaleReviews Given
Nice intro, and love the description. I can really picture how everything is set up in the room.
And I love the title font btw!
The interaction is amazing, and the play/chase was adorable. and #Raymentine for ship name???
As good as the other two have been! Nice job!!! :)
That took an interesting turn.... o-o
Can't wait to read more!
Awww... I get that feeling too sometimes. It's important to know when friends aren't friends anymore. I love your poem! It was very expressive. <3
Okay, I thought this was really impressive. It's brief but really subtle, and I feel like there's a lot that I was able to get out of it from Clementine's past.
I really liked the description. Nice job! :)
As always, your writing is great, and I also wanna point out the fact that I thought that hook was brilliant! Like, right from the beginning I was drawn into what would happen next.