France • 18 y/o • FemaleReviews Given
Wow!!! It was really deep and touching story. It took away my heart. Wow!!
So well written. Jason was indeed her hope.
I loved the idea of the story. You matched depression, very well. I was like impressed with this one!
Great job!
XOXO,
Sansid
The story is amazing... I like it!
I kinda liked at and kinda didn't like it.
It was indeed really short but it was a good series.
The opening was really cool... it actually draw my attention. I love the story and there meeting and stuff. I feel that u should write in more description that will make it more interesting and it will definitely draws more attention.
It creates a scene in the reader's mind.
Yes, I agree with @IanG... punctuation was an issue and there were some spelling mistakes also.
Overall, I have to say, you are great, dude! Keep it up!
XOXO,
Sansid
Agreed IanG.... she is definitely making suspense.... I like when u mentioned that he wasn't a human...
I started thinking about it and I think that he should I guess be a spirit of her mom who has changed her appearance but then...
Xoxo,
Sansid
Awww....
That was soo cute and sweet!!
I loved it!
XOXO,
Sansid
This is sooo beautiful! I loved it....
That is sooo pure and true!
Gr8 usage of words for a poem... Loved it!
I think it was pretty cool... but I felt like u wanna end the story somehow that's why u started this thing and then the crash and then she died.
I was thinking about her journal and her dad... I can't imagine losing his wife and daughter... I think you should have done something else. I mean... I am not offensive or saying that it is bad and what the hell?? But I am just telling u my opinion.
I hope u understand me! I am kinda blunt but please, understand me!
Sending u love and light!
XOXO,
Sansid