Reviews Received
This is really good!! I can relate to it and the pain that comes with it! Amazing!!!!
i like where your journey into poetry is going. your rhyming is different from anyone else's i've seen. great job! :D
I loved this.
It's great, why did you think it isn't good?
can't wait for more!
Wow, this was perfect. I like how you left off right there when he sees her again. But, I thought he had tried to, y'know, follow in Everli's footsteps. What exactly happened is what I wanna know. Great writing, tho!
Wow, incredible! Absolutely worth the wait! I like how you made it a bit longer and added more suspense, it really influenced my reaction. Great job!
i respectfully disagree with the author's note. this is good, it just feels unfinished, but since it's part 2, that's okay. i love how you depicted the change in everli. can't wait to read more :D