United States • 21 y/o • FemaleReviews Received
aww, this is sooooo sweet! <3
Hands down, you're an awesome little sister to the person you're writing to.
Wow, a great example of being scared to be your true self around others. You're really great at poetry! I could never qwq
Keep writing, you're a champion!
this is really good! I like how you included "buncha." it adds character! :)
Ophelia
I love this concept that you've followed here, there's so much psychology about right and left brains. The clashing of the two is so interesting as well. Super great idea for a poem, short and sweet and still exploratory. Cool poem!
short and beautiful. wonderfully inspiring!
So good! You're writing is amazing and I can't wait for more of this character! I would like a bit more clarity on how exactly she met death, please. I already have a theory, but it's not a nice one, so I would like to be proven wrong. Keep writing you are so very talented!
