New Zealand • 22 y/oReviews Received
I dont disagree with the other guy it could use some work, but overall Its an ok story.
It's not bad at all. I think the scraping part was my favorite.
THat's a sweet story! It looks like it's from the perspective of a sheltered kid. But, if not, then it's still pretty sweet! Setting it up as either a story for a devilish world, or one of sheltered children. Who knows? (Well, of course you do, I mean, you wrote this)
But, I love it! Keep writing! We will keep reading!
Oh my god yeah. Happens all the time. It's soo frustrating. Nice poem-story! It's a bit of both in my opinion, in yours, I might be wrong. Anyways, its very representative of the truth. Nice one! Keep writing! We will keep reading!
YES!!!!!!!
Five words: Why is this so me?
Such relate.
The other day, I told my mom I wasn't a fan of math, and she got mad at me. I've always been artistic, but she shut my artist dreams down. "Doesn't make enough money" she said.
Well, anyway. Good poem and a good deep meaning.
Dude, you could have saved it as a surprise for someone on christmas, that would have been a great idea.