New Zealand • 22 y/oReviews Received
Oh my god yeah. Happens all the time. It's soo frustrating. Nice poem-story! It's a bit of both in my opinion, in yours, I might be wrong. Anyways, its very representative of the truth. Nice one! Keep writing! We will keep reading!
THat's a sweet story! It looks like it's from the perspective of a sheltered kid. But, if not, then it's still pretty sweet! Setting it up as either a story for a devilish world, or one of sheltered children. Who knows? (Well, of course you do, I mean, you wrote this)
But, I love it! Keep writing! We will keep reading!
YES!!!!!!!
Five words: Why is this so me?
Dude, you could have saved it as a surprise for someone on christmas, that would have been a great idea.
Yeah, it was a vey overexplained version of the simple satatement, It's raining fiercely outside but I dont have to worry because I'm in the comfort of my home inside.
You could have much more easiy said that.
I'm not being rude I saying that as a joke with a funny Sherlock Holmes attitued in my head
AeEeeAAaaaaAuuuUuiiih! I hate cockroaches. They creep me out.
I wish cockroaches could read.
Then I would print this all post it all over my musty dusty crusty garage.
Such relate.
The other day, I told my mom I wasn't a fan of math, and she got mad at me. I've always been artistic, but she shut my artist dreams down. "Doesn't make enough money" she said.
Well, anyway. Good poem and a good deep meaning.