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I kinda didn't like it!
Felt like there shuld be more and you know!!

Can't explain but overall I feel it should have been more interesting

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Sansid!

I would understand you wrote this at quite a young age, and it's a pretty decent story for the time it was written. A few things I think you could improve on is the storyline. I found it a bit confusing as there was no explanation to what was happening. Overall, it was an okay read.