Striker

My Penis.... is in a state of shock and has that feeling where you know you see something happen to someone and you just grimace and just scream no inside your head a million times over? yeah that's me right now..... but I regret nothing

this is honestly so bloody beautiful, like honestly.... great job capturing all that emotion, I could feel everything that was written here as if I was there.. and it also helps with the immersion for my name also being Dylan, but unlike this Dylan I don't have the kickass singing voice to boot lol.

You better "continue this love", otherwise you'll have one very angry sentient being coming to you and breaking down your door demanding "answers" as to why you "left" it hanging here and not giving "me" more to read

Ahhhh yes, I do hope you finish this story for it is one of greatness and has lots of potential, now if and when you finish it, I shall find a bard to write a song about it because I feel as if that is only fair for a warrior such as this one.
Great story overall, really love it and can't wait for the next part.

Great addition, although there were many minor spelling errors that you may want to check but other than that, it was amazing, sad to see that there might only be one part left unless taylor cheats death, keep up the good work my friend

Jesus, I swear you know how to write a good no a fantastic read, I love it and I hope you plan to make more parts and not just leave it at that cliffhanger, because I want to know what their reactions will be and what happens in those 8 days and 56 minutes, how will he decide to spend them... or..... finds a way to cheat the system! But as always props to you mate.

Plez givz meh hugs. I is lonely...

I love it, and I can relate on a personal level as well as having a sort of first hand account, if you know who I am of course. Keep up the great work.