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it was good but (this is going to sound weird but) with future works, maybe try to make the rhyming lines go ABABCDCD... or something like that instead of AABBCCDD because it does give a different feel so idk just try it out, otherwise, l like the words

OMG love it

omg im crying this is so beautiful!

omg love this sooooooo muuuuchh. amazing!

what. the. heck. THIS IS SO GOOOOOOOOD! I LOVE IT SOOOOO MUCH!!!! UR SO GOOOOOOD!!

its cute. a different stile than i usually read or write, but i like it. how long have you been writing poems? also lol i hate when there is no category for what we write, hahaha.

omgggg i lit love this so much i never knew you were so gooooooood, totally can relate! cant wait to see what you write next! (hey that rhymed)

wow. i like have no words this is sooooo good!