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omg I loved it, the structure was amazing

this gave me so many feeeelz! so so so sweet, and a great story!

OMG love it

oh i was waiting for it to continue! don't stop in the middle!

it was good but (this is going to sound weird but) with future works, maybe try to make the rhyming lines go ABABCDCD... or something like that instead of AABBCCDD because it does give a different feel so idk just try it out, otherwise, l like the words

love this, it made me think and it wasn't to obvious. i definitely recommended it.

i like it, is there a story behind it?

good