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i like it, is there a story behind it?

good

is this for someone or just imagination?

Okay a few things, on the very first sentence there should be a comma after right, in the 2nd paragraph, the last part should end with a period. In the last paragraph at the beginning I think you meant while instead of why, and then when the dialogue switches to the next person, a new paragraph should start. Okay, now on to the next part, I thought it was really great and cant wait to read part 2. Love the plot so far.

omg I loved it, the structure was amazing

this gave me so many feeeelz! so so so sweet, and a great story!

omg ur poems are getting so much better! keep up the work!