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this is good, but you might want to consider an editor! i can see a pattern of grammatical errors, and that's okay! writing takes a lot of work.
~ oddy

hiya!! this is extremely well written, putting aside the minor lack of punctuation. keep it up!

u n i t e , o m g. l e t ' s r e v o l t.

this was long O-O but rlly good! dont quit writing. DONT DO IT!

f i r s t o f f .
GIRL. SO FRACKIN RELATABLE.
s e c o n d .
your writing style is so quirky and amazin'! keep it up!

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*ahem* 'm sorry. you are just good. i relate to an overwhelming extreme.

why did i start c r y i n g
you are such a talented soul!
don't stop writing. like ever. ;-;

wwwwwwwwwaa aa aa ait a miiinuuute.