TheForgotten

Powerful

I liked it, I kind of agree on the rant part, but I agree soooooo muuuccchhh about the self distructive motives of humans and how they act against themselves.
Thank you!

I really like this short but poignant piece. You express so much feeling in so few words, which is rather skilful. Well done you! :-)

this is good!

A very sad but unfortunately accurate look into the nature of human interaction.

This is actually rather intriguing. I hope it is the beginning of a series of pieces or the start of a longer story... The reason I say that is that you have successfully negotiated the trickiest of hurdles when writing a story: grabbing the readers' attention and HOLDING IT. Well done!

I look forward to reading more from you in the future.