United States • 23 y/o • FemaleReviews Received
I wished for more of a rant.
A very sad but unfortunately accurate look into the nature of human interaction.
That was pure beauty!!!!! I know what it is like to lose someone. Please read my story I wrote. It has a lot more feeling then I think I actually put into it. But it is a true soulmate story.
Beautiful. I can relate entirely to this. I had to deal with an evil boy and a bratty girl who just happened to be dating at the time. The boy threatened to kill me once and the girl was just full-on two-faced.
Very feeling. I could definitely sense the pain of the narrator. It broke my heart to hear all that - I guess those who have experiance have a hard time forgetting.
Hang in there!!!
Yes yes yes!!! That was great! The detail, the senery!! I could FEEL it! Oh my gosh yes. Thank you. Please continue. I loved it. I just can't. Oh my gosh. Thank you.
I liked it, I kind of agree on the rant part, but I agree soooooo muuuccchhh about the self distructive motives of humans and how they act against themselves.
Thank you!
A nice, heartfelt poem somewhat spoilt by your failure to CHECK your spelling!
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