TheForgotten

This peice is very honest, and relatable

I liked this poem and how it was put together. Good job, as always.

While definitely interesting I found this story to be a rather good angle on a normal action.

I've been trying to keep up with this series in my small amounts of free time lately, I'd like to see where this could head.

I liked it, it was interesting. The flow was a little bumpy here and there, but overall it was good.

This poem was very honest. The ending could be finished, it depends on how you look at it, either as an open ending leaving the reader to finish and fill in the blanks, or an unfinished ending. Very true poem though.

A good poem, but it is very sad. Everything going okay? Please seek help if you are having unhealthy thoughts, it may not seem like it but life is never hopeless.

Very heart felt. I am sorry about the pain you're experiencing. Writing is an extremely good way to express your feelings. Well done.