United States • 20 y/o • MaleReviews Received
I actually really like this poem. I think it is a way of telling someone that you still care about them but you don't really feel like listening to their problems. I think the only thing that ticked me off was that is was a little harsh, but if that was what you were aiming for then it's a good poem. Keep on writing. You are a great writer and have a lot of potential. TIP: write more poems to get better at writing poems, it actually really helps. :)
This story is very well written and it is very true that sometimes less is more, it's a short story
Ahhh!!!! I love this so much. Action, thriller, tragedy and love all in one go! Keep up the good work!
wow. Left me speechless and looking for something. Depressing, yes, but quite magical. Keep up the awesome work!
I love it. I love the suspense and the mystery. Keep on writing more please!
An interesting read! Definitely weird, and I need to know more about this mysterious circle. What are they? Who's dropping the food?
Anyway, well written. Keep up the great work!
