Optimism101

Well, goodbye soul. Bye emotions, bye mind walls. This story crumbles my mind in a flash, something previously unknown to me in writing. Good job, keep writing!

I liked it! Its got a nice soothing feel towards it. Leaves the reader looking for something.

Op. Bees, you love em and you hate em. Otherwise, it's a nice poem!

I like it. I always love a far-fetched fantasy. I am mad that it ends on a cliffhanger though, but I will follow your works until my inner-book-hunger is satisfied. i gave it 4/5 because I feel that some of the elements are a bit too wack. No offense, I still love it, and the only part I didn't like was the ability to make a computer just with knowledge that they had. I have no problems with anything else, I feel that the fact that only them survived, and the dreams, are all just mysteries waiting to be solved. My inner theorist is waiting!

Phew, I made it through. I got one more though. What if we aren't the base universe and just a super weird version of another universe? What would the base one look like?

Wars are never good. I feel it could use some rewording, but otherwise, it's good!

I like it. Its a good poem, I just feel that some of the word choice and flow could be improved. Still a good poem though.

I like the concept. It looks like it could be formulated into something wonderful. However, I feel it could use some punctuation, as well as some spelling edits. In time, I bet it will be awesome!