Optimism101

I liked it! Its got a nice soothing feel towards it. Leaves the reader looking for something.

Well, goodbye soul. Bye emotions, bye mind walls. This story crumbles my mind in a flash, something previously unknown to me in writing. Good job, keep writing!

It doesn't particularly strike out as hard as I think you were going for. However, I know at least two people it's going to hit hard to. And even if it didn't strike me, I could still feel it's emotion.

Very fun and comedic.

It's really good! If you want to try and make it better, I reccomend adding more descriptions, to help me picture. Maybe more details about the lake, or him.

I can only think sad thoughts ;-;

Awwww, a love poem grounded in reality. You can't get much better than that.

dang.... ;-;