Reviews Given
Heh, love is a tricky thing. But a perfect encapsulation of it.
I know I'm a little late to the review party, but I still feel my reviews help someone :P I love your work. It's amazing, and always makes me smile or cry. I never know which. Keep writing! "Stay Determined!" -Asgore (Undertale)
*insert deviation of "haha" here*
Funny, nice one.
A little overused, but you played it out in such a way that it kinda went away from the norm.
Good One!
Can't wait for the next one.
Keep writing! We will keep reading!
Wow am I late. I apologize for my tardiness. To quote my favorite line, "But somebody came." No joke, in 2016 a game called Undertale was released that had that line imbued in the game. When all hope was lost, somebody came. Somebody supported you. Even if love never comes, you still have us, a community of helpers, or your family, or your friends. A special someone can fill up your heart, but friends do it better. In the light or the dark friends will always be there to support you. I wish you the best of luck in your life.
Hey! I like math class :(. I love doing complex problems and solving for x, its fun. Or just stupid stuff, like how many breaths a person has taken since the dinosaurs have existing (assuming that person lives forever). I do like the story though. It is nice, well written, and I hope for more
I like it. It's... interesting. I have quite a few questions about the characters, all of which I'm sure to figure out from the story or what I can piece together. Either way, you've set up a pretty good dystopian (I think) society where you have the upper and lower class separated completely. I'll be waiting for the next bit. Keep writing! Because people will keep reading.
Its not terrible, I quite like it. Its another sort of those "Intertwined by fate" stories, If I am reading it right (I might not be). I hope you finish this series, unfinished stories can be my worst nightmare. XD, sorry, just made myself laugh at the thought of one dude reading a story, then it ends on a cliffhanger and he just falls to his knees, clutches his fists, raises them to the air and yells "NOOOOOOO"
I like it! It's a nice representative of a working relationship. I feel like it is well worded and well written. I hope you keep writing!