Optimism101

Wow. Sincerely. Wow. It's amazing. I don't know how to explain it. I don't know how to critique poems very well XS. But still. Nothing changes the fact that you wrote an amazing poem. Keep up the awesome work!

ooooooo, romance! These stories always get to me, and have a special place in my heart. Not only that but it was wonderfully written! The characters are all their own, not different faces to the same person. Well, in some ways. I can't wait for more!

I always love a "Flame in the darkness" Poem. A saving hope. The last cause. A nice poem.

Nice. A little misleading, but isn't that a good thing? An enjoyable story, and definitely is relate-able.

Hurts. A good definition, but it still hurts. Pain is something we all have to deal with, but acceptance is more important. A well written poem. Describes one's nightmares well.

Dang. This one, is amazing. It expresses something that we all have to deal with. That lifelong bond that gets broken. That trust that you have that is so easily removed. It is written with such certainty, such truth, and after reading the Author Notes, it makes sense. It's always hard, and always will be, but we can always move on. We can always grow to be better. With spelling and grammar, it could use some more edits as well, but as a story, and autobiography, it's amazing.

I can relate to this. Maybe not directly, but from a different point of view. It's sad to see what I don't, to know the side I will never see. I can't imagine the pain it would bring. On another note, it expresses the sadness, the hurt, the pain, everything. It shows every second of the event, and it hurts. It really does. I feel so bad for a fictional character. It is well worded, I wasn't able to find mistakes easily, and its amazing. I hope you keep writing And as long as you do, I will keep reading.

Apparently, all you write is cliffhangers! Gah! Keep writing! Sooooooooooooo many questions, so many mysteries, I bet one day you will write a story that is completely just un-answered questions, and it will be like 10 pages! Oh wait, there are more parts XD. I'll get to those. In the meantime, nice premise