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"So lost." I love the song selection. Faded is one of the top hits I have ever heard. It is on my playlist like 5 times XD. That refference made me sooooooooooooooooooooo happy. Otherwise, its an amazing story, and tells a beautiful tale. Sad, but beautiful.

Thanks, happy after Valentines as well. A loving story, and it really is a feel-good. Thanks for the happiness

Another great part to a series! Adds more description about Ren, and sets him up for greater stuff later! (Personal predictions. My friends hate movie nights with me) Still so many questions unanswered, but I'm sure they will be answered due time. Keep writing! We will keep reading!

I always love a "Flame in the darkness" Poem. A saving hope. The last cause. A nice poem.

Alright. You and your "four review" Thing. I don't care if I have to force three of my friends online or not to review I WILL read the next section! WIth the predictions. I see a bit more... humanity from the characters in this section, but also that crippling darkness eminating from Mistress Silver. Lef and Turin... Not sure what to feel about them. I liked this segment. We learn more, and she is starting to get suspicious of the place. Anyways, Keep writing! We will keep reading!

Nice. A little misleading, but isn't that a good thing? An enjoyable story, and definitely is relate-able.

Hurts. A good definition, but it still hurts. Pain is something we all have to deal with, but acceptance is more important. A well written poem. Describes one's nightmares well.

Dang. This one, is amazing. It expresses something that we all have to deal with. That lifelong bond that gets broken. That trust that you have that is so easily removed. It is written with such certainty, such truth, and after reading the Author Notes, it makes sense. It's always hard, and always will be, but we can always move on. We can always grow to be better. With spelling and grammar, it could use some more edits as well, but as a story, and autobiography, it's amazing.