Optimism101

(Repeat what I stated in the first review for this series)

Everyone needs that You. And no one wants to lose them. This is every emotion people need. Lord of the Rings... Never feel this pain. Haha, inside jokes :P. Otherwise, this is relate-able on so, so many levels. Keep posting your depressing stuff on here, and I will keep reading. Talk to me if you ever feel the need to.

(Repeat what I stated in the first review of this series) I can't come up with more original content XD

OOop. Now we are getting somewhere. One last question, times 4, where are they going? Where did he come from? Where did he go? Where did he come from cotton eye joe?

GRRRR! Still there are questions unanswered! You are an attention grabber for sure. At least one more part. One more question answered.

Huh.... Was not expecting that.....
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Nice story.
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Not much else to say, sorry

"Where are you now?" It's not a bad poem. It is a sort of chaotic, that connects to someones fear of losing them. Maybe one day you should try happy poems. I bet they would uplift more people than ever were down.

It's really good! If you want to try and make it better, I reccomend adding more descriptions, to help me picture. Maybe more details about the lake, or him.