Thomas Ray

Unfair! I was just getting to know this character, and you killed them. This is the second time this has happened to me today, too.
Well, anyway, this is cool.

This made me sad. I don't agree with your opinion on religion, but I do agree with your take on school. School is way harder than it should be, way too structured, and astronomically overrated by adults and students alike. It has its place, as well as definite benefits, but as a whole it's failing on a nation-wide scale in regards to educating people.
On a different note, you obviously don't think false hope is better than no hope, so my question is where do you think hope should come from?
Keep writing! Emotion poured off this piece in buckets. But also, no pressure.

This sounds like a toxic telationship. Those are really bad.
Good poem!

The only thing I don't really like about this is the stealing diapers part. There wasn't really a precedent for that, and I guess I could have missed something..... It just doesn't share the dream-like memory aesthetic the rest of this has. I love the last two paragraphs, though. They bring everything full circle, and that's awesome.

Really cool so far. The way it's written is very distinct, but if you did that on purpose, then well done. Either way, I'll read the rest.